A Quiet Side Street Comments

short playful and sweet one.lovely.........lovely.I invite you to read my poem-To bosom thee. I'll rise.........plzz do comment your views..

Flirt! Tease! Good! Joe Hughes on Poemhunter and at joehughes.org.uk

But why couldn't you have made the poem last a bit longer? ? Short but sweet.

Nice energy flows throughout this piece though short and sweet. Parting is such sweet sorrow...lol

Nice, and playful! Once bitten....ha!