Saturday, August 11, 2012

A Quiet Night Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

A full cookie cutter moon is sparkling
Like a pearl brooch dripping with diamonds.
Bright stars are sprinkled across the night sky.
I made a wish upon a star on high.
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Gayle M. Citrus Maize Water Nora Shoshone Doherty Winchester, story song Glen A, Sweeney +
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Dr Antony Theodore 10 February 2018

I made a wish upon a star on high. Heaven stirs in twinkling sweet dish delights. While chocolates dip in dreams and dance, .. very poetic in expression and imagination dear poetess. tony

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Constance K Yost 28 August 2012

Hi Gayle, -rich chocolates dipped in dreams-I absolutely love it! I'm delighted to see you have a new one! Constance

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Smoky Hoss 25 August 2012

Beautiful writing, it all sounds so good!

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Joseph Anderson 14 August 2012

A very refreshing write. I like that cookie cutter moon. Glad you are back with your paintings

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Autumn Winds 11 August 2012

I really like the wonderful descriptions in this poem.

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Captain Cur 11 August 2012

Made me hungry for sweets watching for shooting stars.

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Leria Hawkins 11 August 2012

Very Nice Poem! Well Said! !

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