A Quiet New Year Comments

A very nice introspective piece...great write!

hmm....good write there.......nice personification used........well penned

a very nice poem. i enjoyed. don't feel bad its the lack of realization that keeps us away from doing what we promise. but you are not one of them.good luck for 2009.

I agree with Yusof. We can make every day a new beginning in our endless striving towards perfection.

To me every day is a new year........a new to another new life.

The obligations of a new year are very well comprehended, the first thing that comes to mind is 'resolution', resolutions pampered in Jan and totally forgotten by Dec, which almost all of us do.....u have brought out the feel well.

A good piece of poetry, a timely reminder to keep New Year promises and a good dig at the politicians responsible for the present state of affairs at the national and international levels. It was an ejoyable read. Deepender, Thanks for sharing it. Keep it up. CP

This is rather lovely Deependra. The idea of personalizing the New Year is most original and clever too. You also manage to slip in some wise and eminently truthful statements about the current state of the world and your responsibilities within it. Nicely shaped poem too - the fireworks make a pleasing coda. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

an appearance...new but apprehensive...leave alone us, Deepen...even the New Year wouldn't be knowing how 'he' is going to fare another 365 days here...good write...imaginative...10