Thursday, July 12, 2007

A Quiet Mind Comments

Rating: 4.5

Lift up the cover and look
at the things scattering,
hidden, secret things;
the way insects
...
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Ayn Timmerman
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Goldy Locks 17 October 2007

Me too. best care.

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Leonard Daranjo 13 July 2007

Ayn, The first stanza - very evocative. Brings images to the mind. I could almost smell the earth, could almost see little creatures scurrying around when I read it. Nice piece. Take care

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