The long sore day now gently fades,
The cool river calls, as evening shades.
With family, I splash and play,
Washing the world's fatigue away.
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And I too Love to watch the fireflies dance! .. Millions Of 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++
Love this! .. So beautifully painted with such breath taking imagery! ..
Such an incredibly beautiful poem! .. You can feel the serenity within! ..
Do you ever stop writing such fantastic poems? ? ? This isssoooo awesome! It makes me think of camping in Lake Sakakawea. Brilliant! ! ! Thousands of starrs! ! ! *******************
What majestic and cozy scene is portrayed here! It transports the reader to a place of peace and joy! Thank you for brightening my evening, dear poetess!
This is how good Poetry works! It leads you to appreciate the meaning of life and it shows the beauty and wonders of existence. A very meaningful poem full of hope. Very inspiring. To my favorites.
A very beautiful poem about the ideal quiet evening. Very wonderful.
The serenity of life is beautifully painted on the canvas of this wonderful poem. We can feel the good life brought about by the generosity of nature and the solidarity of family. A treasure to visit this great poem!