A Quiet Disguise. Comments

a quiet, contemplative piece. Human nature is a mystery, sometimes even when it's our own.. -chuck

Excellent write, Fay. A 10 from me. Best wishes Ron

VERY NICE! ! I love the wording you put into this.. So many thoughts you're ending leaves people thinking what may come next.. Great work KRISTA

Fay, you wrote this with so much understanding, this really is superb. Bob

Masterly! From beginning to the end same tight tempo......wonderful poetry.

Although I understand and appreciate the quality of your words this piece is so close to myo wn plight that it hits home twice as hard.T hanks for articulating my present mindset or whats left of it.... Sid. xxx

I really enjoyed this one! Thank you soooo much

A remarkably honest piece that faces pain head on. The strength and logic of the writing, which deftly avoids wallowing in pity, carries prescriptions for renewal and rebuilding.

A BRILLIANT OPENING TWO LINES.THE THREADS OF LOVE CAN MAKE A REAL GOSSAMER OF MISERY WHICH, WHEN READING YOUR POEM i COULD ALMOST TOUCH AND TASTE JIM

Fay......... This poem is heartwringing.. .................................this scheming to please the unpleasable leaches her... suggests a lifetime of bullying pressure. If you know this woman put your arms around her and tell her she deserved better, that now she can look at a sunrise and enjoy it, unafraid. Martin

Not meant as a pun, but I see an EVERGREEN piece of writing here it is beautiful in its context and content, so well done and may your memories be as ageless as you 10++++ CHRIS X

When the dream shatters, one must look through the broken window and find another reason for living on. Very touching. This one came from the depths of a caring soul. Love, Sandra

She hardly now measures a truth from a lie... ............................................................ Fay, It is remarkably written..... Sometimes we do not wish to see a difference....10..... warmest regards, Tsira

A deep sad and meaningful piece, well penned Fay 10/10 Tom