November falls mildly this year, and smiles
On afternoon strolls, beckoning boldly
Through grey clouding skies, as mile upon mile
Surrounds us, in stylish profusion, yet bringing
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Simply breath-taking! I went along this stroll seeing wild flowers and tasting berries interpreting it as my own experience. Your poems are a mind-expanding treat! The following speaks of you being one with the landscape...it suggests the illimitability of our ability to be one with the nature... 'So, taking our cue, we leave without sound' Just so the right way to end it
Great poem. Thought provoking. I, not being from England-had to look up the word gorse. Still-a great poem. God bless all poets-MJG.
Beautiful Fay.Autumn is a magical time.to experience passion with a loved one among golden russet, falling leaves and cooling breeze.Warmed by sharing a mulled wine and a mince pie.. Sid.
A beautiful Fall landscape that captures the mood of my favorite season perfectly.
Fay, this one took me back to my earlier years, I was with you walking on that path, you described the grey grey November that I remember well. Thank you Bobx
Thank you for permitting me to take a virtual walk in your serene autumnscape. It was a soothing experience. Lovely work. Warm regards, Sandra
I Don't know about the mild bit, but a very nice poem Fay.. Andrew 10
Oh lovely write Fay so nicely said your pen is working well my friend your thoughts too Chris 10
Beautiful poem! I read it in a loud voice and the effect is simply fantastic!
This is lovely Fay, A beautiful portrait of Autumn. You will see Autumn theme repeated many many times in my work. It is my favorite season of all. With such a bounty of beauty and delight how can a poet Not love Autumn? thank you for sharing this one. Susan