Saturday, September 29, 2007

A Quiet Afternoon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Alone, quietly sitting wondering what tomorrow will bring.
Oh it is the beginning of spring, the sweet scent of lavender
soon to fill the air, the yellow buttercups painting the
fields, while grasshoppers jump along the banks of the
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Melvina Germain
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Meggie Gultiano 13 October 2007

what a lovely quiet afternoon you have here..i love the way you present this, Melvina..nicely penned.. hugs, Meggie

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Ben Gieske 08 October 2007

The beginning and the ending are the best parts of this poem and the ending is even better than the beginning. It holds the real atmosphere of the situation.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 30 September 2007

ummm Melvina, your so good at these story poems, i could spend hours reading your work...10

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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