timelessness
of a moment of joy
in the mind, can remain
as a epitome of happiness
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its wonderful, timelessness of a moment of joy....quick surrender at the lotus feet.. you have brought out the hidden gems of humanity....if readers can understand and embrace what it says.....the world shall be a better place.... good poem.
wonderful.... time...its a concept...relative.... i dont know whether time exists or not... there certainly are some moments which go beyond and space... loved the poem ma'am. thank you.
only those blessed with independence can make a total surrender...only they have the courage to accept the outcome of surrender...
another thought provoking, well written poem Ritty..........
an excellent poem once again ma'm....essence of living captured so beautifully...10
This is a philosophical and inspiration poem Ritty. I admire the way you moved down the page to explain your message, and I agree in that what we do in this lifetime has a bearing on the next. Great writing! Love Karin
In the moment there is no time, but it contains all we have done, our samsara from our past lives, can be removed by good deeds, if we live wrong we suffer now and in the future, because the lessons learned are wrong.. Once on right path don't deviate. Thank you for the reminder. Bob
A wise write Ritty, you really write from the centre where you're seated with undwindling faith, a great message!