in my eternal search
white face and deep eyes
but with inspirations ~ highs ~
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Is it a muse? One strong enough to awaken your soul and bring you forth from the grave of the lost for words. Your pen is beautiful in its soul cry of remorse and pain.
this poem looks as a product of a specific phase or mood...but very expressive..!
it feels me as if the poet moves through death.... after death and returns to earth again. unique writing style... liked it very much...
Wonderful poem. Really enjoyed reading this. I like the action in the verses.
Yes, i am a deadly soul! ha, ha, ha no one expected for that einh? ............. makes me spell-bound...................loved it
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I sent to you a message so now allow me to laugh a lot! ! ! ! KAKAKAKAKAKAKAKAKA And thank Poet yours comments are always welcome! ! ! Laughing again! ! ! !
Hey, i am crumbling here! , , , , i loved this line (twice) ? ? ? ? ? ? what guts? ....this made me laugh, but i did NOT 'laugh MY guts out'; i think i heard some expression like that [laugh....guts out] when i was a kid. in grounded ...... how about grounded or in (the) ground? just some thoughts. :) i've never met a perverse skeleton i didn't like! i gave up trying to find a (free and easy-to-find) translation of einh. german. i heard a lot of germans went to brazil after or during ww2. i really like this story of a frustrated (and maybe-insomniac) dead poet. i think i saw a movie once/not twice entitled Dead Poets Society. shall i send an application to you? thanks Poetheart in earth again [your name REALLY fits here] for sharing. bri :)
I like it! A whole world of imagery filled with multi-dimensional thoughts.