We live in mental caves
Looking for exits,
Our Lives
Are very strange
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A profound and realistic perspective on the peculiarities of human existence and experiences. Top marks!
Good people would be attacked always by the bad. Very good poem.
It's looking for those little nuggets of gold that are whispered in that still small voice of calm that can be uplifting but rare. The ‘I love you' that you never hear.
Very power opening, this lovely poem. " We live in mental caves Looking for exits, "… and more: 'we control nothing'
Our freedom has been eroded by the people whom we have given our trust to rule. So sad that these public servants are the ones being served and protected by their constituents. A well expressed and strongly felt poem.