A portal closes then you see
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There are very few poems I would equate with the quality of one of my favorites, Robert Frost. I would put this one of yours up against 'The Road Not Taken' any day.
There you go, getting inside my head again. Bright new twist on the old 'opportunity knocks' saw. Liked it.
A very 'acceptance of the inevitable' kind of poem. I liked it very much, good repeat lines and rhyming. Good flow too. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Another very well written poem Ivor! ! ! Keep them coming! (a10) ! ! Thad
Forks in the road, We all have them, It's amazing the choices that some will take and other's wouldn't dream of attempting it. Good write.