Is that the time?
Has it passed by
so suddenly
without reason or with rhyme?
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the problem of evil. death and cruelty......how shall we explain....... so many ask this question. and you are asking God. very nice poem .. like the expressions like. Forgive the constant murders, the constant theft of breath? we shll never find an answer for the evil here on earth....... you are philosophical in this poem. thank you very much. tony
I appreciate your comments. Thankyou very much. Regards Sally P. P.
Thanks for your much appreciated comment. Best wishes..... Sally
A compelling and creative composition that illustrate the ills of war in an incredible way! Well done my friend!
the title drew me in...........like a moth to a flame. my wings are now singed. too intricate/intelligent/mysterious? ? ? for me to say more? maybe. or i'm lazy. thanks for sharing. bri :)
A poem with so many questions for the rescinding world where moral values are getting drowned. I dont what God has to ask and what God will answer to the victims. Thank you so much for sharing. Regards.
Thankyou, Ramesh, for your interest. It is so lovely to hear from you.
This is a sensitive and respectful poem. You don't speak in a knowing voice but rather create a quiet space so that we can become aware of available blessings, and listen to the soft voices inside of us. For some this might seem ridiculous - but I feel enriched by the visions you have shared with us.
As you haven't written a poem for a while I looked through a few of your older one's Sally. This is a very good one and with so much bloodshed going on in the world right now very apt too. I give it top marks!
A question yes we all ask of God, I think you are right in the last line Sally for there is no end to fighting... very nice when you bring the subject to the fore, regards
The best part is..we will just 'know' when the Time comes! ! Really nice piece. Thankyou. Regards..Sharon.
Sally-some potent thinking here. You search and I'll search and will we find some answers on this side? A gripping poem, well rendered-Joe. I came back to this sight
Faith is a personal thing and that is absolute. However, if a god, and then depending on type, humanity may have to be detained for questioning. Thought provoking.
Enjoyed this one too - Very well written, great imagery - deep, meaningful and a lot to think about...
God's love, grace and mercy is beyond our understanding. And His forgiveness is to all who have a concrete faith in Him. Thought provoking. 10
More questions than there are answers - and would we be happy if we had the answers? I once thought I had a few of them. Good lines in here Sally, like 'When the desolate eyes/ of war are shut.' Lovely.
All those constant murders, they might've thought that they've gotten away, but there comes a day of judement, Sally.
Sally, God will give us everlasting life, if we believe that He is who He says He is. You have mastered all these thoughts in prose and we can see God shinning through your words. Great Job. Lynn
From black to white! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thankyou for your interest. Kind regards. Sally P. P.