Thursday, July 25, 2013

A Question After The Incident Comments

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Standing beside an open window,
Peeped into an empty room,
A dog I saw, aware awaken,
Hungry it looked,
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Jahan Zeb
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Kanav Justa 04 November 2013

... you created a beautiful mystery with this poem... loved it

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 06 September 2013

Oh wow a mysterious poem pennd in a super fine way! But nice if d dog dint hurt d child. Pls do review my latest, a gambling poem.

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Farah Ilyas 24 August 2013

mysterious poem. spirits remains with u, sometimes in short form, sometimes at highest peak but not vanishes anytime, u just need to awaken it up.

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Payal Parande 11 August 2013

hmm..indeed a mystery, only you have ability to create such story... a great one sir

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Unwritten Soul 28 July 2013

Animal also has an instinct...sometimes better than some people _Soul

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 27 July 2013

mysterious poem with good image questions at the end of the reading makes us think more deeply I love it, thanks for sharing

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