A Question? Comments

thanks deepti for your comments on 'a soul' part 1...torn or born..a good question...mother's warmth common in both poems...the soul is there right from conception which i missed..you have it...the mother introduces everything to the child...even its own soul

right from conceiving to delivery welcomed by relatives...may be we do feel strange and that's why we cry...the mom's touch is its only warmth...written beautifully

it is worth attracting points rating 10

ya reality realised when gained conciousness

haha......thoughts of a newborn.......well penned

deepti beautiful lines... but you not safe even there... imagine what all happened in places like Godhra...asam... this is the sublime reality.. 10+++++++++++=

Yes we were born, we can't but rewind life like cassette tape. A nice composition. My 10 with it.

well written Deepti. even when we grow up sometimes we wish we crawl back to the safety of mother's womb.10 for this

Born or torn Its life, a boon Keep apart the torn Count the fortune Will you not find one…? Yes… then you are at gain Look at those who don’t even have one! ! I know the above lines are Words magic and consolation Still when you think wiser … ‘Attitude’ is the power Is both the fact and fiction. I hope this will quench a little Thirst in that question...

Very nicely written. Thanks.

born to get torn up and then to reborn... good poem, deepti

slowly growing - moment by moment sleeping and sleeping but still growing. when we live our life in comfort, we feel so.But a moment comes in man's life when all these joys and comforts are snatched away and we feel a kind of vacuum.Then comes the question of existence which you have asked so beautifully.Well done.keep it up.