A careful consideration of all things.
A weighing in the balance of experience.
A remembrance of treasured words received.
And from a discordance of events
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Now this is an interesting and stimulating poem for life is quite simply 'Question upon Question, ' is it not..............Jack Johnson has a song called Questions which I love, and I love the way your poem here is worded as well......Thanks for making me think! ~`~`~` marci. :) ~`~`~`
Bravo! ! So beautifully written and thought provoking. Deep. I truly love it! Rene'
David, questions upon questions. Answers seem as distant as mountains that we all want to climb at time. Lovely rhythm to this poem. Just glided along. I loved it. David
Yes, that is exactly how it is. A spark, a question: 'Is this it? ' I especially like: 'And from a discordance of events a gem arises hewn of discontent, ' Well done. alicia
This asks a lot of questions or rather raises a lot of questions in the reader's mind! A lovely introduction to your work David. HG: -) x
A poem with just enough 'meat' to make the reader think. And that's how it should be. I found it quite ethereal and mysterious. Love, Fran xx
*takes up lotus postion*. Thought provoking and beautifully written. Hugs Anna xxx
I am now locked in contemplation...a question posed, eloquently composed...Justine
Have read all your poems and liked them, they are all very thought provoking, Colin...
Great poem David, good job on this write!