Sunday, January 17, 2016

A Quest For Existence! Comments

Rating: 5.0

My life has become a question mark,
a mere interpretation.
Every piece of my life scattered,
like a child's messed puzzle.
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 June 2023

Will God banish all my sorrows and give me a chance for a peaceful existence? Humble prayer!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 October 2022

My soul awaits a fresh start full of love, peace and happiness....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 August 2022

Moreover, your line...I lament over the incompleteness of life... brilliantly addresses the unending quest for something in life.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 December 2021

Yes, I strongly believe oneday all your sorrows will be wiped away. You will find a suitable answer to the million dollar question mark that you have put at the end...5 stars.

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Nosheen Irfan 28 January 2016

Another sterling piece from you. Written from the depths of heart as all your writings are. Your choice of words is once again simply beautiful. I'm touched n moved to my deepest core.10 many times.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 January 2016

The puzzles of life! With the faith of the hope ahead for a peaceful existence. Nice work.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 17 January 2016

God will banish our sorrow if we our self make attempts towards it with all faith in god...it leads to rise of sun of joy and diminishing dark night of sorrows....liked it...thanx for sharing :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 January 2016

Life is mysterious and always carries question marks. My soul awaits for definitely a new beginning Full of peace and love is also true. This poem is entirely thoughtful and interesting in this context.10

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