Wednesday, October 1, 2008

A Queen Behind Comments

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From dawn to dusk, pursuing hot
my righteous crooked ways
divine bewitching in her smile
urging to go outright,
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Narayanan Ramakrishnan 24 February 2011

beauty and poetry abound and profound, provides a very nice read. great

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 22 June 2010

‘On waters deep or shallow mine /Illusive she on trail...noetic oscillations…swings…to and fro… rich concept…Sir… Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 hf

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 30 January 2010

of course, this one is poetic

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Nalini Hebbar 21 September 2009

very poetic and full of wonderful images...regards

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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

Righteous crooked ways, Divine bewitching is her smile Rachel Ann Butler

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Patti Masterman 11 July 2009

I love the words in this one, it strikes me as quite a magic touch here.

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Fathmath Sana 17 May 2009

fully described about a Queen. nice words. i smiled when i read 'divine bewitching is her smile' and 'Queen real of unreal world '...... you have a great imagination Kesav. its wonderful... :)

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 11 April 2009

aha...metaphorically loaded... :)

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Vaibhav Pandey 07 April 2009

a gem of a poem.....truly magical....the queen of dreams....10+

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Sandra Martyres 29 March 2009

'Divine bewitching is her smile'....great choice of words...The Queen behind is a very charming poem -

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 21 January 2009

MAYA brought out there very poetically..and we dance to her tunes...10

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Naidz Ladia 09 January 2009

QUEEN IN HER HIGHNESS..nd UR THE KING IN UR KINGDOM...SHE S THE REAL QUEEN N UR REAL WRLD...WHAT A NICE PIECE DEAR KESAV..

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Nandhini .... 17 October 2008

Very mistic your Queen is. So capturing & dramatic. Many to loose their sanity Looking for her in light......

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Sumita Datta 16 October 2008

Very clear and complete imagination.... It's truly a nice piece of thought...

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Dhanesh Aradhye 16 October 2008

amazing.. simply amazing lines... :)

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Marilyn Lott 15 October 2008

Mysterious royalty is always so exciting, takes us into a wonderful fantasy world. Great poem and thanks so much for your kind comments on my work. Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Linda Moore 14 October 2008

Life and all it offers....Mysterious Queen, which path to take......like it..10+

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 October 2008

'Queen real of unreal world She oars my swaying sail; On waters deep or shallow mine Illusive she on trail...' A lovely poem. Wonderful.

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Ken E Hall 14 October 2008

A Queen Behind with you in front -a gem a classic a 10-nuff said, regards Ken e Hall

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Rani Turton 13 October 2008

A deftly phrased poem with unforgettable images. One of the best I have read!

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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