From dawn to dusk, pursuing hot
my righteous crooked ways
divine bewitching in her smile
urging to go outright,
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‘On waters deep or shallow mine /Illusive she on trail...noetic oscillations…swings…to and fro… rich concept…Sir… Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 hf
Righteous crooked ways, Divine bewitching is her smile Rachel Ann Butler
I love the words in this one, it strikes me as quite a magic touch here.
fully described about a Queen. nice words. i smiled when i read 'divine bewitching is her smile' and 'Queen real of unreal world '...... you have a great imagination Kesav. its wonderful... :)
a gem of a poem.....truly magical....the queen of dreams....10+
'Divine bewitching is her smile'....great choice of words...The Queen behind is a very charming poem -
MAYA brought out there very poetically..and we dance to her tunes...10
QUEEN IN HER HIGHNESS..nd UR THE KING IN UR KINGDOM...SHE S THE REAL QUEEN N UR REAL WRLD...WHAT A NICE PIECE DEAR KESAV..
Very mistic your Queen is. So capturing & dramatic. Many to loose their sanity Looking for her in light......
Very clear and complete imagination.... It's truly a nice piece of thought...
Mysterious royalty is always so exciting, takes us into a wonderful fantasy world. Great poem and thanks so much for your kind comments on my work. Warm Wishes, Marilyn
Life and all it offers....Mysterious Queen, which path to take......like it..10+
'Queen real of unreal world She oars my swaying sail; On waters deep or shallow mine Illusive she on trail...' A lovely poem. Wonderful.
A Queen Behind with you in front -a gem a classic a 10-nuff said, regards Ken e Hall
A deftly phrased poem with unforgettable images. One of the best I have read!
beauty and poetry abound and profound, provides a very nice read. great