Thursday, August 20, 2009

A Quarter Past Too Late Comments

Rating: 5.0

I stay up and I wait
For the phone call you promised me at eight
But I look at the clock and it’s getting late
I sit patiently
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Shilesha Johnson
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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 30 August 2009

Sagacious wait and sincere communication.

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Kesav Easwaran 26 August 2009

'two' past 'one'...well, waiting is that much hurting...good revelation...thanks...10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 25 August 2009

these words from your lovely heart depicting sweetbitter waiting for..... beautiful dear! 10+

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Surya . 21 August 2009

yearning for frendship.so well expressed as i feel miserable. voted10 surya

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 21 August 2009

The longing is very miserable I can understand your agony Shilesha.Nice writes.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 August 2009

And won’t be there to answer your call when you’re ready I rest No longer trying my best I’m done Its 2 minutes past one....still it hasn't come. that is intense love... very good depction and i love it dear most.....10 read mine all strains stop...dead nights.. foot steps...

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