Closed in the tin of my own
I forgot about the essence of the world
Remembered in this dance
Whirling, I come in more and more deeply
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Hello, Anna! It is very nice to meet another Polish poet here. I like your poem though I love rhyming stanzas most. Powodzenia!
A superb piece Anna, I feel it to be your best so far. The final line are extremely uplifting and full of optimism. Regards Denis Joe
A poem of wisdom. Not to be ignored. GW62