A Puzzle Within A Puzzle Comments

This is such a great insight into how mindful you are! A smart write and penned mindfully.Well done! ! ! !

yeah quiet true but sometime the puzzle are really dificult.i appreciate it.

a puzzle of life to be solved at every step...........its the way u solve that makes a different person of each...........wonderfully put forth.

Yes, it's true that there are many mysteries, or puzzles, of life to think about :)

well life i the great puzzle in life and god is the one with the directions follow him and im pretty sure you'll find the answers to your questions.

You reveal something eternal every time.... You have a good sense in embellishing your poems with different different prosodic features. And you bring before us various images through your verse and dats absolutely brilliant. As a lover of poetry I'm interested in the verse you write, and never obsessed of TITLE.. ;)

ma'am i appreciate your comment; but with the little knowledge i can say that while writing this poem; the idea of 'a dream within a dream' never came up to your mind; so you are wrong in this aspect! ! ! it may be true you didn't like the content though! ! i take that as a fault and will try to rectify it! !

Title is too close to Poe's A Dream Within a Dream, stop copy writing.

Sound obscured and senses reversed The moon shook and curled Idle mind and severed soul An empty puzzle in an empty world! My favorite line.... I absoluetly love this poem its soo deep. Well written

love the poem it is very good

I really enjoyed reading this poem. Its really deep. Its obscure yet clear. Very good!

This poem elicited much emotion from me as life is a puzzle within a puzzle within a puzzle...very good write....blessings

Written great. I really enjoyed reading this.

Beautiful :) the puzzle within itself! ! top marks

A really fantastic poem, really liked it. A great write.

beautiful lines....Only to see if my fate is Playing a puzzle with me! ...at times life itself is a puzzle.......good composition