Wednesday, October 14, 2015

A Puzzle It Is Comments

Rating: 4.2

Of what entails it, the essence that doth give life its worth. And how to beget it, that intricate secret that be like salt upon broth; once lost and bland. Its sprinkle but to make your days, a thing to behold.

A troubling riddle it is, one that sends my thoughts with a swirl, as round my head they move in a curl. And a ponder its roil leaveth in me, its toil to have my chin seek rest, as atop my knuckle it goes.
Could it be well hidden beneath the veil of power, its ecstatic feel left to those that wield. And their joy being the work of a wand, whose wave has the world snug at their feet.
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Eddie Imonyatt
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Kelly Kurt 14 October 2015

A nicely written poem, Edgar. Very expressive and enjoyable. Thanks

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Eddie Imonyatt 15 October 2015

Thanks Kurt, humbled to know you took joy in reading it

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2015

Perhaps as a whisper it runs and it dazzles with words of expression as prize of mind. Wonderful and interesting poem shared as a piece of thought provoking work....10

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Eddie Imonyatt 15 October 2015

Really do appreciate your reflection of it Mahakul, nice to have provoked your thoughts.

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