Saturday, July 7, 2007

A Purpose! Comments

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What dith the ground say?
'Look t'wards the sky! '
What dith the sky then say?
'Nay, look t'wards the ground! '
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Spencer Reuillard
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Dom Wisperez 07 July 2007

very creative. many purposes intertwined into one. for me, as I read it, the poem needs more poetic organization. segrigate what you say and chop it up using the plot to place yoru segrigations

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