Monday, February 4, 2008

A Purest, Enriched Love. Comments

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as delicate as a rose,
as pure as the sun.
My love for you burns deeply as the days ever so pass.
Anything you say, anything you do, i will be there, forever in love with you.
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Darlene Belcher
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Obinna Eruchie 23 August 2009

The fire of passion, the crystals of love, the lifes own love is sent from above./ Sky upon skys, seas beyond seas, heavens own gates open to see. Very passionately penned lines. Well done.

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Howard Johnson 14 February 2008

The last stanza is very beautiful, nicely filled with immages, I like what Yoonoos said......and I agree..

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