A Pure Drop In An Ocean Of Noise Comments

Cordell is a great man to explain his true opinions on the poem as opposed to just saying GREAT. I liked his opinions on your poem, they strike true, I think.

excellent poem i feel i can relate to this a lot.fab

This is a very well constructed poem. It has both rhythm and rhyme. I can find no big flaws of any kind. The content may be a little weak, but a writer who makes the most of it is to be praised. GW62

i have a great point we both rhyme as if we find inspiration from rap...still i don't really dwell to find inspiration i just rhyme because i have grown a custom to in my poem...10 by the way its great

a blanket of hope A blanket of hope that I have Envelops me when I fear Thinking about the future obscure And a past so broken A blanket of hope is a reward Came as blessing from Allah Unto me on a night When my heart was torn out of fright A blanket of hope is all I need To protect me from evil seed That may grow due to lack of trust Unto my one true God Allah A blanket of hope is so warm It keeps me safe and not any more forlorn A brand new ray has flashed unto me As I am sheltered with blanket of hope from thee HOPE IS ALL WE CAN HOLD ON TO TOGETHER WITH STRONG CONVICTION AND FAITH UNSHAKEABLE.............HOPE, TRUST, FAITH....DEATH ISNT THE REMEDY.........LIFE IS JUST A PHASE THAT WILL SOON PASS AWAY........