Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, September 3, 2010

A Pure Cheating Comments

Rating: 3.5

I never knew it was cheating
It came as rude shock and devastating
I lost the grip and started melting
It was really the end of dating
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Kevin Carney 04 September 2010

Very powerful poem. You have so many great lines with each different meanings. You keep it flowing and the reader totally hooked to the end. Super write.

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Darshna Chopra 03 September 2010

Though it sprang a surprise It was sudden fall from rise It tought me enough to be wise

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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