Tuesday, May 28, 2019

Apuppet Comments

Rating: 5.0

O, stop!
Please stop!
Stop your maneuvering
I am not a puppet
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Bharati Nayak
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Edward Kofi Louis 17 June 2019

In search of the only truth about her! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 June 2019

Please stop! ....../ I am not a puppet / To dance to your calls../ You have forgotten / That I too have a life of my own......outstanding coceptulization. Really a woman is not the puppet of a man. Beautiful poem with nice theme. Thanks for sharing.

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Bharati Nayak 08 June 2019

Thank you Dash of Poetry for your nice comment.

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C F 08 June 2019

Outstanding poem... no other words are needed to describe it! 10+

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 May 2019

Do you think a puppet's tear is not a tear? A puppet's language is not a language? O'stop! Stop your maneuvers! Touching expression! This poem is just magnificent! (10)

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Bojangles 28 May 2019

Dancing on a puppet string she sings.

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Bharati Nayak 29 May 2019

Many thanks Bojangles for your kind read and appreciation.

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Kostas Lagos 28 May 2019

Brilliant poem! Brilliant!

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Bharati Nayak 29 May 2019

Thanks a lot Kostas Lagos for your appreciation.

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