A Punctured Dream Comments
Her home was housed upon the mountain high
Where the earth rose steeply to embrace the sky,
Where clouds and dreams in tandem roam
Mix and mingle unhindered in their celestial home.
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A heart touching, the story is so beautifully narrated that it shakes the hearts.................10
The life of a little angel so poignantly narrated with apt diction really touches my heart a lot......Rajeshji.....amazing write.......10/10
Heartfelt poem touching indeed. Many times life may take twist and turns. Many dreams she may be having while her parents may be having also....its really a punctured dream..loved reading each lines...
Many a time life takes unexpected turns and we stay baffled unable to find why fate turns so cruel.... The story of this girl is so moving... She has been the apple of eye of her parents and dear to everyone of the hill folks.... But all dreams woven around her were shattered with her untimely death like a punctured balloon! The narration is so poignant and touching! A 10 Thank you Rajesh for your comment on my poem.. Eagle on Wings!
a sad story of our tribal girl, though we have the free medical facilities all around India with good brains taking care of the patients patriotically in our Government Hospitals, but the case like this still happens, which is the saddest situation..
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7/20/2025 9:28:42 AM # 1.0.0
A sad story narrated beautifully in this well-rhymed poem, with a great flow and pace.