Monday, July 23, 2012

A Public But Solitude Suicide Comments

Rating: 4.8

Tremendous corruption and greed
overwhelm a young boy's soul
he looks towards elders and plead
although he doesn't realize the world is cold.
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Shania K. Younce 09 February 2014

Wow! Great poem. I enjoyed it a lot. Bien! !

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Bella Hernandez 18 December 2012

i am speechless! Great job: D keep it up! ! ! ~Bella

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This poem is fenominal. So much power in your words.

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Anhelica Velasquez 03 August 2012

this poem. this is amazing. i love it, its true, and it speaks wonders.

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Daniel Warner

Daniel Warner

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