Friday, September 14, 2007

A Prophetic Vision Comments

Rating: 5.0

Striding by the path
Mystified by conflicting sensations
Some footprints leaving behind
And some footprints yet to come….
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R.k Das 16 September 2007

a very very intense poem, so beautifully mused and so perfectly composed, the poem reveals less and and conceals more of the experience of the agonised odessy, the footprints are a wonderful reminder of a bygone time so beautifully erecorded by a sensitive poet like you,

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 14 September 2007

Loved this 'awakening' poem you have written. well done. Thanks for sharing, Sangeeta. Very nice.

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Melvina Germain 14 September 2007

Loved your poem, enjoyed the read. We learn from the past, live in the present and hope for an even better future.--Melvina--

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Michael Shepherd 14 September 2007

Very true, Sangeeta... As Eckhart Tolle says, having learned from Ramana Maharshi - we only have the present moment to live in...'past' and 'future' are there...

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 14 September 2007

Life can be Confusing so many demands on the heart, which road to chose well now thats an art... loved your poem Sangeeta great write...10

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