Sunday, April 15, 2007

A Promising Girl Comments

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There's a girl I know
that brings a smile to my heart
reflecting a life that is
a beautiful work of art
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Trevor Schulte
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Philip Housiaux 14 March 2008

Short lines strong rhymes with a pouring forth in single stanza - something to appreciate here. Well done.

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JoAnn McGrath 15 April 2007

Oh..beautiful....you need to show her that......us ladies are all melters when it comes to poetry with compassion... ; O)

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Rajaram Ramachandran 15 April 2007

This is the longest love letter to a girl, it appears to me.

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