Thursday, June 27, 2019

A Promise To My Fiancé On Our Engagement Comments

Rating: 5.0

I cannot promise you only flowers
cause thorns are inescapable
I cannot promise you only light
cause dark is inevitable
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Birbal Singh
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Chinedu Dike 07 December 2020

Very powerfully and movingly penned in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. Great lines nicely put together.

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 July 2019

where there the happy and the sorrow are tolerable together, there the love is everlasting

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Manpreet Singh 11 July 2019

thanx for commenting.

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Manpreet Singh 28 June 2019

thank you for reading my thoughts.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 28 June 2019

First of all I congrats you for your new life, I heard about your engagement. A Poem of great importance, life is not only happiness but also agonies and struggles, it's the man's duty to stand with the other or would say life partner what the poem expresses.

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