The sun made a promise to God
to come everyday in the morning
and disburse all the rays
gifted by God
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Hi, The sun made a promise to God He never asked for a reward From the God For the duties he offered! Nice poem.
Hi Ramesh, Ahaa! The sun made a promise to God! never asked for a reward from the God! for the duties it offered! Wonderful!
Yes, the sun lavishes his glory on Earth, never seeking a reward! A nice poem! !
An enjoyable piece; loved the concept regarding rewards from God; nice job. -Joe Breunig Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory A Journey Of... Poetic Purpose
Wonderful idea and new images. Message of the poem is elegant.
Nice you present what God can do without his subjects asking for rewards...regards
I truly like the poem.. it's really nice gives such good message to life...