Friday, October 7, 2011

A Promise To God Comments

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The sun made a promise to God
to come everyday in the morning
and disburse all the rays
gifted by God
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ramesh rai
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Anita Trivedi 02 October 2013

I truly like the poem.. it's really nice gives such good message to life...

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 03 September 2013

Hi, The sun made a promise to God He never asked for a reward From the God For the duties he offered! Nice poem.

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 03 September 2013

Hi Ramesh, Ahaa! The sun made a promise to God! never asked for a reward from the God! for the duties it offered! Wonderful!

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Valsa George 03 September 2013

Yes, the sun lavishes his glory on Earth, never seeking a reward! A nice poem! !

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Joe Breunig 21 November 2012

An enjoyable piece; loved the concept regarding rewards from God; nice job. -Joe Breunig Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory A Journey Of... Poetic Purpose

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Rose Flores 15 February 2012

Thank you for the wisdom in your poem. Keep writing!

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Rajendran Muthiah 16 January 2012

Wonderful idea and new images. Message of the poem is elegant.

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Ronel Mccarthy 30 October 2011

Just remembered to vote -silly me

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Ronel Mccarthy 30 October 2011

So true -the sun always shines. Lovely write!

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Miriam Maia Padua 13 October 2011

a very inspiring poem.. full of facts...

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Ken E Hall 09 October 2011

Nice you present what God can do without his subjects asking for rewards...regards

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