# 'A Promise Is Kept When It's...' Comments

Deeply felt, beautifully delivered. You are a fine imagist. Warm regards, Sandra

Daffodil, there is some powerful imagery contained in these sparsely worded but poignant lines. The title suggests, the poem delivers and the last stanza poses an infinitely ethereal conclusion. Rgds, Ivan

Reading this one leaves me very sad. But it is put together beautifuly. lIfe can treat us roughly and there is going to be pain and sorrow. Each of us, goes through the misery of pain, physical or emotional, most everyday...most especially in the loosing a loved one too soon, as i did my mother. Keep on writing, your work is beautiful! Theo