Sunday, August 24, 2008

A Promise Is A Promise Comments

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You promised you’d always trust in me,
I believed that'd always be true.
But behind that face of veracity,
You hid a different you.
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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 September 2008

'You promised you’d always trust in me, And I believe that'd always be true, So you now deserve to see my broken dreams, Cracked, on the floor, around you.' Nicely composed and presented poem, I enjoyed it.

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Cody Wisneski 24 August 2008

another great poem about how people can break your heart. but there is someone who always comes and helps you put it back together.

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