Monday, January 22, 2007

A Promise Comments

Rating: 5.0

Joy has filled my heart now,
as you and I made a vow.
Never at last will I be sad,
in my heart I can not be mad.
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Susana Lliteras 17 October 2007

Beautifully written piece...love it, thank you for the comment, and i'm looking forward to reading more of your poems...Thank you so much for sharing.. Take care, Susana

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Ana Monnar 31 August 2007

You are a good man that believes in love, commitment, and the happily ever after. Ana Monnar

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Janelle Morehart 30 June 2007

Oh how sweet! I love this poem. It's truly wonderful. Dreamy and Lovey. Sensitive and Caring. So sweet and coming from a man. Lol not to stereotype of course but you dont always expect those things. Anyway's I love this poem, as I do the rest of your poems! Your a wonderfu writer please keep up the great work!

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Meggie Gultiano 20 June 2007

a heart warming poem about commitment and a promise to love and to hold no matter what. A beautiful and well penned poem from a great poet

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Edna Javelosa 29 May 2007

lovely poem of sweet love and sincere commitment...

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Tracy Rollings 25 May 2007

Great poem, love the feeling of being together forever, feelings of great hope, and love, the flow was great and wording was excellent great write with great talent, keep up the good work, your friend Tracy ~10~

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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