Friday, August 23, 2013

A Promise Comments

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When you're stuck on the lonely dark road and no one in view,
Just always remember that i'm the light eagerly waiting to be found by you.
And after all that we have been through,
All i can wish i u know by now my feelings are true.
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Aswath Raman 23 August 2013

This is a nice romantic poem Nikita! A powerful flow of passion. But I feel you need to reframw the middle four lines.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 23 August 2013

A wistful poem with lovely super rhymin! Pls do read my horses poem. Tnx

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