A Promise Comments

This poem is written with great simplicity and sincerity behind. Enjoyed reading this poem.

Simple and sweet wonderful!

Short & sweet.... The poetess seems to be a deep thinker! ! ! ! ! ! Hey miss poetess.....we will like to see a stuff on the theme as such 'promise broken...or Broken promise......... Lets see how many way u can turn the course around! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! PS: -Trynna work out on word selection....a bit more..instead of keeping the focus on rhyme..... BEST OF LUCK

nice and inspiring i need to read your poems more often take care,