Monday, May 21, 2012

A Promise Comments

Rating: 2.5

I can do anything I want -
So I promised myself.
I will sleep on roses tonight
cover myself with lilies of the valley
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Kasia Fedyk
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 05 June 2012

your heart print, so beautiful........10

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Lenore Lee 03 June 2012

Wonderful poem, this truly states the freedom of life that we all have within us if only we search.

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Anil Kumar Panda 31 May 2012

thats truly is a life full of bliss.can i ever do that? short and sweet ink.

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watch me as the river carry my gossamer self snugly into is cloying arms watch me as I set a distant gaze through my silvery enclosure a lotus is a king and kingdom at once—

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Captain Cur 22 May 2012

Your doing it now, in this poem. Dream! Dream! Dream!

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