A Promise Comments
While i'still opening the eyes*
While my heart was still speaking*
While my hands was still warm*
While my arms were still strong to embrace you*
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What a lovely devotional love poem. Loved the inter-connection of love and creation. Beautifully penned, from the heart indeed. ; D
'promised on behalf of the love i'will maintained my heart for you* , , , I shall wait for that to happen.. really nice move and full of promises....10
‘I'promised on behalf of the love i'will maintained my heart for you*’ ~ Real love does so I'promised i'will plant my love in the heart forevermore* ~ Real love ramifies I'promised never will to change my heart with the other heart* ~ Real love is one directional I'promised to continue to live throughout your life* ~ Real love is ‘One Unit’ Excellent poetry…and it is diamonded love as stars* are smiling after each sentence… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
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7/19/2025 6:55:00 AM # 1.0.0
I LOVE this poem! ! It has a lot of sentiment. keep up the good work!