A Promise Comments

Good rhyming and 'I'm Yours'...Love Poem...nicely woven in words Thanks for sharing Tenner ~ niv

Beautiful poem, I like it alot. I've tried the fits like a glove rhyme and don't like that bit so much. I think you are very talented

great peom.... nice way to say it.... better poets than i are the ones with a way with words like you, and this poem is proof

what a wonderful way to request.....lovely young man!

Well I perfectly understand!

You really do write from the heart, don't you?

The bomb can sometimes kill any life and the greater bomb is word...this seems like a beautiful flower with hidden bomb...But the bomb have two types, good one or bad one and this is good one..Sealed the promise with good thing and if you show the wrong other than it looks it will explode and it's broken..Nice poem anyway well handed_Unwritten Soul