@a Promise Comments

Both sides of life will come…life is but mixed bag of drama… Light and shade are there…erect head with positiveness take up the challenge …then both the books will be well read…indeed a good poem… 10 Ms Nivedita UK

Yet we never will surrender We have to go and fight for it use To reach the last pages of our journey Till to the last days and that is a promise..........YES AND THAT HAS TO BE THE PROMISE TILL THE END OF THE JOURNEY... BEAUTIFULLY INTERWOVEN WITH WORDS.. I LIKED ITS PLACINGS.....10 READ MINE... CLEAR EMOTIONS....AN END TO SOLITUDE

Our two different stories become one Rachel Ann Butler

Good. But revise to correct grammatical errors.don't be careless. e.g. love is like a poem - IT also has feelings - NOT they lose (love? } is like a poem ... it reveals