A Promise Comments

This poem illustrates the incredible range of your poetic style Ernestine. Different from many of yours, this free verse poem is a salutory read (particularly on this site, I suspect) about those that charm with their wily words and their handsome faces. 'Like his stories, all bogus, burning the heart, slowly.' stood out for me. Great poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

This is wonderfully written and a joy to read! Lilly :)

Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. Great work full of fiery passion. Andrew. x

very touching..passionate piece..i love the gentle flow of words..

I enjoyed reading this Ernestine, sometimes we put our trust in people and realise we have made a mistake, the point of this write being things or people are not always what they seem, well-penned as always, Love Lynda xx

A strong fire that burns in this one Ernestine, not your usual style but passionate points made none-the -less Love duncan X