Sunday, December 4, 2011

A Procession, Shall We? . Comments

Rating: 4.7

Let us take all our possessions,
And go for a procession.
The bricks that we arranged enviably
And painted pompously to live in,
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Philip Jose
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Enigmatic, poignant, yet perturbingly truthful

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Maria Rose Dominic 03 January 2012

It has definitely got style... meaning.. excellent theme and imagery..everything to make a poem rich! ! Loved it :)

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Vipins Puthooran 06 December 2011

((((((The possession- The bricks that we arranged enviably and painted pompously to live in)))))) .. What a rational reviewal! ! ! But live only for the need, not for luxury! We will not carry them with us when we go with the wind, , But human nature is like a carpenterbee nowadays, , 'Tis a wonderful poem, excellent penning! ! ! Top marks for you! ! !

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Dead Leaf 06 December 2011

WELL PENNED...AND GOOD THEME

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Philip Jose

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Kottayam, Kerala, India
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