A Problem With My Heart! Comments

Wonderfully presented in this poem the rise and fall of emotions, the pleasure and pain of heart in well crafted lines.

Here you detailed the nature of your buoyant heart with full of emotions. That's why it flies high with sun rise, it laughs and shines but at the same time it cries in darkness apprehending some fright. which I find not a problem but natural Anyway - I wish you.... to fly high with a jubilant smile. Thank you

Such Wonderful Words Dear Geetha. Love the title, great you have a healthy heart. Love is all around us and will bloom when you least expect it. x

Everyday sun rises with infinite rays of hopes, some of these sun rays are reflected by the moon in night but most of the sun rays are turned in the stars of frustration and twinkle on the sky of life. That's a problem with every heart. Geetha felt it it more than others and the consequence came in the shape of a beautiful poem...............10

Such a beautiful poem with heart felt emotions. We rise and fall in our emotions every day from sun set to sun rise. The way you wrote it is simply marvelous.

The seat of life and emotions so well depicted in beautiful words really touches my heart......Geetha......10

It is such a cute, little poem describing your heart's flight in excitement and joy and its steep downward descent in grief and disappointment! Such erratic fluctuations are so very natural Geetha. Still if we can maintain an equilibrium, it will be great! Enjoyed much!

A heart which soars and fall is a heart with a bagful of emotion. This rise and fall of our emotion makes us feel that we are human and this in turn make us feel how blessed we are to be one. A beautiful poem that took me too on a heavenly flight on the realms of the sky.

A heart which soars and fall is a heart with a bagful of emotion. This rise and fall of our emotion makes us feel that we are human and this in turn make us feel how blessed we are to be one. A beautiful poem that took me too on a heavenly flight on the realms of the sky.

keep smiles and laugh be courage to fight with love

A heart full of feelings has its own ups and downs in life like it is with our own dazzling star each morning and evening. Beautiful poem: A couple of lines of yours to quote: On every sun rise / It soars so high / On every sun set / It falls down to ground.