Monday, March 5, 2007

A Pristine Beginning Comments

Rating: 5.0

i was quivering in thrusting cold and dampness
heart palpitating
choking convulsive blisters
droplets of tears flowing down
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che sara sara
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Jazib Kamalvi 01 December 2017

A great start with a nice poem, che. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Dr.subhendu Kar 15 November 2011

quite poignant write...

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che sara sara

che sara sara

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