Tuesday, November 6, 2007

A Prisoner's Tears... Comments

Rating: 5.0

My tears stream down from my soul
When I become like a bird in the cage
Now, this steel cage is my place to live
Entombed within four walls of the prison
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Ravi Sathasivam
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Patricia Grantham 28 March 2013

A very soul stirring poem. Everybody have to cry sometime, a prisoner is no different. Doesn't matter what walk of life you came from. A really great poem. Thanks.

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Sandra Fowler 06 December 2009

Memory is the greatest punishment for any crime. Very eloquent write. You have achieved rapport with this suffering soul.10/10. Warm regards, Sandra

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 September 2009

My tears stream down from my soul When I become like a bird in the cage Now, this steel cage is my place to live Entombed within four walls of the prison..............freedom is worth to be explained. its enjoyment comes when u r incage....10

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Shashendra Amalshan 08 June 2009

yes sir..I know how it feels....to repent on once actions...i find it realy hard to move on when i see somethings that happened in my life...very touching one..... 10+++ regards shan

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