A Prisoner Of Doubt Comments

I like it a bit now. Keep working and fix the spellos. I will dropp in again soon. H

Ahh Volia! I like this one even more... (more amusing-as you can tell that my criteria for poem liking is based on amusement) But I like'd reworking it... I was inspired^_^

I am glad you like it. I don't, at all. H

I like this one a lot. Hmm... perhaps the rhyming is a little off with the 'so tight ' part...