Sunday, March 27, 2005

A Prisoner Of Doubt Comments

Rating: 3.5

A prisoner of doubt
is quick to the drain
being bound to his pout,
With a crippling chain.
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Candice Renae Williams
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Herbert Nehrlich1 29 March 2005

I like it a bit now. Keep working and fix the spellos. I will dropp in again soon. H

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Candice Williams 28 March 2005

Ahh Volia! I like this one even more... (more amusing-as you can tell that my criteria for poem liking is based on amusement) But I like'd reworking it... I was inspired^_^

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Herbert Nehrlich1 27 March 2005

I am glad you like it. I don't, at all. H

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Candice Williams 27 March 2005

I like this one a lot. Hmm... perhaps the rhyming is a little off with the 'so tight ' part...

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Candice Renae Williams

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