Sunday, February 10, 2008

A Prisoner In My Own Comments

Rating: 3.5

I feel like a prisoner
Trapped within these four walls
Young I am
I should be free
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Yiling Ding 10 February 2008

Your desire for freedom and salvation is a feeling I can strongly identify with. Your direct, almost succint, language really drives the desperation home.

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A poignancy to this one, like a trapped bird in a cage, it reads well, flows smoothly.

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