Wednesday, November 25, 2009

A Prisoner Comments

Rating: 3.5

A prisoner traped within the bounds of mind,
hides the world but keeps you completly bind,
to hide you in the depths of hell you cannot escape yourself,
you cannot escape the secret, hidden, lovely wealth,
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Keli Mims
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Born2 Shine 11 December 2009

This read's quite well, I'd be intrigued to hear it aloud, spoken in the pace you have set it in. I enjoyed it very much.

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Flint, MI
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